commit e0bf79dd66c1ce5b6666d41c6569dfd06b7315b3
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Sat Dec 16 07:51:04 2023 -0500

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index f09d15d..edfde87 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 pagetitle: The Final Writing Process
-version: 1.1
+version: 1.2
 ---
 
 # The Final Writing Process
@@ -20,7 +20,9 @@ As we near submission of a final report or paper, the work flow should be:
 I need to review each chapter independently, so only send chapters
 that: 1) I've not yet seen the first draft, or 2) I've seen one or
 more drafts and have asked for that chapter again, before the final
-report is assembled.
+report is assembled. (i.e., if I've indicated I do not need to see the
+chapter again until the final build, please do **not** resend it to
+me).
 
 Once every chapter is cleared, a PDF of the whole paper should be
 assembled.  For a report, this include a cover page, table of