commit e0bf79dd66c1ce5b6666d41c6569dfd06b7315b3
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Sat Dec 16 07:51:04 2023 -0500

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index f09d15d..edfde87 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 pagetitle: The Final Writing Process
-version: 1.1
+version: 1.2
 ---
 
 # The Final Writing Process
@@ -20,7 +20,9 @@ As we near submission of a final report or paper, the work flow should be:
 I need to review each chapter independently, so only send chapters
 that: 1) I've not yet seen the first draft, or 2) I've seen one or
 more drafts and have asked for that chapter again, before the final
-report is assembled.
+report is assembled. (i.e., if I've indicated I do not need to see the
+chapter again until the final build, please do **not** resend it to
+me).
 
 Once every chapter is cleared, a PDF of the whole paper should be
 assembled.  For a report, this include a cover page, table of

commit 03a7857a5f8965fcf9b29ae79b8c03deeb65f532
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Fri Dec 15 20:17:39 2023 -0500

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index d0ee86d..f09d15d 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 pagetitle: The Final Writing Process
-version: 1.0
+version: 1.1
 ---
 
 # The Final Writing Process
@@ -16,6 +16,11 @@ As we near submission of a final report or paper, the work flow should be:
   
 + Each chapter should be sent separately (as a PDF), not bundled
   together.
+  
+I need to review each chapter independently, so only send chapters
+that: 1) I've not yet seen the first draft, or 2) I've seen one or
+more drafts and have asked for that chapter again, before the final
+report is assembled.
 
 Once every chapter is cleared, a PDF of the whole paper should be
 assembled.  For a report, this include a cover page, table of
@@ -23,9 +28,9 @@ contents, and any appendix material.  Pay attention to captions/tables
 breaking across pages or margins and/or automated figure numbering
 being out of whack.
 
-I will then go over the final pdf as complete document, checking for any
-final corrections I was keen to see in place. Any needed changes may kick
-it back for another round.
+I will then go over the final pdf as complete document, checking for
+any final corrections I was keen to see in place. Any needed changes
+may kick it back for another round.
 
 Once the final report looks good (or looks good with a few indicated
 fixes), I will give you the go-ahead to finalize and submit.

commit ddae98a3fba193429ebb60340e941c262d7348c9
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Fri Dec 16 09:05:10 2022 -0500

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index 65cc4ec..d0ee86d 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,43 +1,44 @@
 ---
 pagetitle: The Final Writing Process
-version: 0.8
+version: 1.0
 ---
 
 # The Final Writing Process
 
-What we are going for is:
+As we near submission of a final report or paper, the work flow should be:
 
 + Chapters given to me, comments given back, such that if all comments
   are addressed the chapter is "ready to go" and "I don't need to see
-  again until final".  I'll say as much on each.
+  again until final". I will say as much on each.
 
-+ This includes: all major chapters, but also the abstract and
-  references.
++ "Chapters" includes all major chapters (of course), but also the
+  abstract and references.
   
 + Each chapter should be sent separately (as a PDF), not bundled
   together.
 
-Once every chapter is cleared,assemble a PDF of the whole report.
-Include cover page, table of contents, and any appendix material.  Pay
-attention to captions/tables breaking across pages and/or automated
-figure numbering being out of whack.
+Once every chapter is cleared, a PDF of the whole paper should be
+assembled.  For a report, this include a cover page, table of
+contents, and any appendix material.  Pay attention to captions/tables
+breaking across pages or margins and/or automated figure numbering
+being out of whack.
 
-I will then go over it as complete document unit, checking for any
-corrections I was keen to see in place.  Any needed changes may kick
-it back to you for another round.
+I will then go over the final pdf as complete document, checking for any
+final corrections I was keen to see in place. Any needed changes may kick
+it back for another round.
 
-Once that looks good (or looks good with a few fixes), I'll give you
-the go-ahead to finalize.
+Once the final report looks good (or looks good with a few indicated
+fixes), I will give you the go-ahead to finalize and submit.
 
 If a project is has an industry sponsor, the sponsor has 30 days to
-review the report.  In that review, they may: 1) allow it to be
+review a project report.  In that review, they may: 1) allow it to be
 published as-is, 2) redact parts (e.g., pages/words), 3) request an
-embargo the whole document for 1-3 years.
+embargo the whole document for 1-3 years.  Once reviewed by the
+sponsor, you will submit your final approved report and do the eCDR
+the following term, embargoing as needed.
 
-Once reviewed by the sponsor, you will submit your final approved report
-and do the eCDR the following term, embargoing as needed.
-
-Those graduating before the sponsor reviews the report will do so by
+Those graduating *before* the sponsor reviews the report will do so by
 submitting just the cover page. The final report, when submitted, will
-later be "backfilled" into the project.  Note, even the cover page
-eCDR cannot be submitted until the entire report is approved.
+later be "backfilled" into the project.  Note, for an IQP or MQP, even
+the cover page eCDR cannot be submitted until the entire report is
+approved.

commit 85c527020c58fab1fa4696bd72f36f9c833c4c99
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Fri Dec 16 07:48:40 2022 -0500

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index de3c636..65cc4ec 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,24 +1,28 @@
 ---
 pagetitle: The Final Writing Process
-version: 0.7
+version: 0.8
 ---
 
 # The Final Writing Process
 
 What we are going for is:
 
-+ Chunks given to me, comments given back, such that
-  if all comments are addressed the chapter is "ready to go".
-  I'll say as much on each.
++ Chapters given to me, comments given back, such that if all comments
+  are addressed the chapter is "ready to go" and "I don't need to see
+  again until final".  I'll say as much on each.
 
-+ This includes: all major chapters, abstract, and references.
++ This includes: all major chapters, but also the abstract and
+  references.
+  
++ Each chapter should be sent separately (as a PDF), not bundled
+  together.
 
-Once the above are done, you assemble a PDF of the whole report.
+Once every chapter is cleared,assemble a PDF of the whole report.
 Include cover page, table of contents, and any appendix material.  Pay
 attention to captions/tables breaking across pages and/or automated
 figure numbering being out of whack.
 
-I'll then go over it as complete document unit, checking for any
+I will then go over it as complete document unit, checking for any
 corrections I was keen to see in place.  Any needed changes may kick
 it back to you for another round.
 
@@ -30,5 +34,10 @@ review the report.  In that review, they may: 1) allow it to be
 published as-is, 2) redact parts (e.g., pages/words), 3) request an
 embargo the whole document for 1-3 years.
 
-Once reviewed by the sponsor, you'll submit your final approved report
+Once reviewed by the sponsor, you will submit your final approved report
 and do the eCDR the following term, embargoing as needed.
+
+Those graduating before the sponsor reviews the report will do so by
+submitting just the cover page. The final report, when submitted, will
+later be "backfilled" into the project.  Note, even the cover page
+eCDR cannot be submitted until the entire report is approved.

commit a262d8201a5895c7251c935b937c58e2506228c5
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Tue Aug 9 09:17:35 2022 -0400

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index 5bf4d26..de3c636 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -18,23 +18,17 @@ Include cover page, table of contents, and any appendix material.  Pay
 attention to captions/tables breaking across pages and/or automated
 figure numbering being out of whack.
 
-I'll then go over it as a unit, checking for any corrections I was
-keen to see in place.  Any needed changes may kick it back to you
-for another round.
+I'll then go over it as complete document unit, checking for any
+corrections I was keen to see in place.  Any needed changes may kick
+it back to you for another round.
 
 Once that looks good (or looks good with a few fixes), I'll give you
-the go-ahead:
+the go-ahead to finalize.
 
-+ Stadia IQP and Bio MQP - you can then start the eCDR process.
+If a project is has an industry sponsor, the sponsor has 30 days to
+review the report.  In that review, they may: 1) allow it to be
+published as-is, 2) redact parts (e.g., pages/words), 3) request an
+embargo the whole document for 1-3 years.
 
-+ For MQP Nova and any SV MQP student graduating in C-term (I think
-only Sam G), you'll submit JUST the cover page and abstract.
-
-Sponsors have 30 days to review the report.  In that review, they may:
-1) allow it to be published as-is, 2) redact parts (e.g.,
-pages/words), 3) request an embargo the whole document for 1-3 years.
-
-Once reviewed by the sponsor:
-
-+ For all other students, you'll submit your final approved report and do the
-eCDR in D-term, embargoing as needed.
+Once reviewed by the sponsor, you'll submit your final approved report
+and do the eCDR the following term, embargoing as needed.

commit 0a3a035cc794a63af63c86c0c68decfdb2d808f2
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Mon Aug 8 13:58:58 2022 -0400

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index 8c2d208..5bf4d26 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,6 +1,9 @@
-# Final Writing Process
+---
+pagetitle: The Final Writing Process
+version: 0.7
+---
 
-v0.6
+# The Final Writing Process
 
 What we are going for is:
 

commit 27469b4b69803e1877ac1585bb185b85a38d8135
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Wed Jan 26 08:08:45 2022 -0500

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
index 0d21cb4..8c2d208 100644
--- a/end-game.md
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Final Process
+# Final Writing Process
 
-v0.5
+v0.6
 
 What we are going for is:
 
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ What we are going for is:
 
 + This includes: all major chapters, abstract, and references.
 
-Once the above are done, you'll assemble a PDF of the whole report.
+Once the above are done, you assemble a PDF of the whole report.
 Include cover page, table of contents, and any appendix material.  Pay
 attention to captions/tables breaking across pages and/or automated
 figure numbering being out of whack.

commit c953ec66785852640f6e91b87d121fb0e6571aa3
Author: Mark Claypool <claypool@cs.wpi.edu>
Date:   Tue Apr 13 12:10:05 2021 -0400

    Updates

diff --git a/end-game.md b/end-game.md
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..0d21cb4
--- /dev/null
+++ b/end-game.md
@@ -0,0 +1,37 @@
+# Final Process
+
+v0.5
+
+What we are going for is:
+
++ Chunks given to me, comments given back, such that
+  if all comments are addressed the chapter is "ready to go".
+  I'll say as much on each.
+
++ This includes: all major chapters, abstract, and references.
+
+Once the above are done, you'll assemble a PDF of the whole report.
+Include cover page, table of contents, and any appendix material.  Pay
+attention to captions/tables breaking across pages and/or automated
+figure numbering being out of whack.
+
+I'll then go over it as a unit, checking for any corrections I was
+keen to see in place.  Any needed changes may kick it back to you
+for another round.
+
+Once that looks good (or looks good with a few fixes), I'll give you
+the go-ahead:
+
++ Stadia IQP and Bio MQP - you can then start the eCDR process.
+
++ For MQP Nova and any SV MQP student graduating in C-term (I think
+only Sam G), you'll submit JUST the cover page and abstract.
+
+Sponsors have 30 days to review the report.  In that review, they may:
+1) allow it to be published as-is, 2) redact parts (e.g.,
+pages/words), 3) request an embargo the whole document for 1-3 years.
+
+Once reviewed by the sponsor:
+
++ For all other students, you'll submit your final approved report and do the
+eCDR in D-term, embargoing as needed.